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Tomorrow (Free verse) by Quarton

All is transformed through loving you... winter's sun is warm, her breeze is soft against my face; fresh-washed leaves and autumn colors, excuse the rain. The fog is a veil to hide our kisses and city noises drown our sighs; hatred is an excuse for loving, sorrow a reason for laughter, sadness a cause for smiling, today, while you love me. In a crowd, I have your laughter and your beauty; alone, I know the depths of your love. How will I live with my memories, tomorrow--when you leave me?

horus8 24-Jun-03/12:47 PM
If you pulled off that quetion mark at the very end, you'll double your audience, your votes and your message, and I will give you three tens in six minutes.




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