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Shut Up (Angry Progression) (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom

You preach against preaching and scoff at hypocrites Pull your self from your pulpit and sit your ass down Cause I got a news flash for ya Mister Your lying to yourself and burning bridges as you go Talking bout shit you don't know I've got a half a mind to kick your teeth in Your just lucky I'm in a wheelchair buddy!!

horus8 17-Jun-03/4:32 PM
"But the other half is smarter than that
Oh wait! Did I say that?" it's great up until here, than it pooters out. replace that with "You're lucky I'm on vacation" or something to that effect. It shows possibility and humor, both of which you need in a piece like this.




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