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Extra Strength Tylenol (Free verse) by DurtKL

Acetaminophen, The active ingredient in Extra Strength Tylenol, Is a pain reliever. Uses are listed as Temporary relief for Minor aches and pains Resulting from Headaches, arthritis, Toothaches, the common cold, Menstrual cramps, and etcetera. Her symptoms a broken heart, overflowing tears, And heavy breathing. Yet, None of these were Listed on the label. So, I wondered why She downed the whole bottle.

horus8 14-Jun-03/6:58 PM
I'm changing my 2 to a 7, because you deserve better here. You've paid your dues, and this piece stood its ground, and it still does. I would make it an 8, but I hate tylenol, because my cousin died of Ryan's syndrome.




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