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Layne Staley's Sunglasses (Haiku) by Jeremi B. Handrinos

A son's curse searching to find a dead-end father That beats him to death

Robert K Foster 12-Jun-03/5:11 AM
ABSOLUTELY. bravo. Huge difference that adds to the impact of the poem.

P.S. I apologize about my comments being fraught with typographical errors.




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