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Unmasking Wyverns (Villanelle) by horus8

Watch me slave at words I could never say Monsoon shark god furious The love of my father, she snaked away. Wind swept waves bled 'til Sunday It's a shame I am that curious Watch me slave at words I could never say. Fierce night howls paved the way And the way it was deleterious The love of my father, she snaked away. Children raced past our well-lit display An unintentional metamorphosis Watch me slave at words I could never say. A crow-haired woman asked, "was I okay?" Lips crimson and voluptuous The love of my father, she snaked away. A god of wind, a shark at play Your past is not mysterious Watch me slave at words I could never say The love of my father, she snaked away.

Kitch 12-Jun-03/1:50 AM
Rich in detail, well written but it just aint my cup cake. Heres a 6 not your fault I licked the wrong parts.




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