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Timing (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

The tick-tock-tick of the walls, pictures, windows, has me inhaling the stench of sterility while the high point in my eyes blackens the room and definity falls away.

horus8 27-May-03/11:28 AM
You want to see timing.Check out the inside of my brain.

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