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Aurora & Eclipse (Free verse) by OneFingerAnswer

A glimpse of light, you came into my life Bright, beautiful, spledid, yes but all to fleeting I let the light shine upon me enjoying it And yet the light reflected off me The shine changed me, my visage To all who could see I had changed and yet they never knew The smile, like a trick of light that shows the hairs on a face Never seen before, noticed but unknown Showing up but not to stand out And now that light is gone and yet again the face changes Now in the dimness they still can't see why They don't notice the fading shadow of said smile They never knew of you, For while I basked in your light I eclipsed the truth I hid you as you wanted Now you hide again The light is gone and the shadows have come Now I must become acustomed to the dark once again

horus8 24-May-03/4:53 PM
I see, well, I'm sure it's not the first or the last time. Hang in there. I would wager my soul that this will turn out to be a blessing in disguise. These calamities have a way of changing one for the better and attracting people to you that are more worthy and accepting of your gifts and love. I have a feeling something wonderful is right around the corner waiting to take you to the next level. One must molt to reveal their true beauty, so molt. I'll be waiting to hear the good news, because trust me, it's on its way. For now just know that I'm right, and you'll be fine. farewell for now.

With all my hope and strength.
Your friend.

Jeremi (horus8).




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