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Whales
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Haiku
) by
Jeremi B. Handrinos
A whale's suicide. Beaching herself with eyes wide. Cleaner than Ocean. Dry docked whale boat. Captain strikes match off his leg. Leaning on that bone. Boy visits sea world. Falls into Killer Whale tank. The whales save his life.
Robert K Foster
23-May-03/10:30 AM
line 1 and two rhyming is a distraction. haiku 2 and three are freakin' awesome, worth a doubloon apeice.
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