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Unmasking Wyverns (Villanelle) by horus8

Watch me slave at words I could never say Monsoon shark god furious The love of my father, she snaked away. Wind swept waves bled 'til Sunday It's a shame I am that curious Watch me slave at words I could never say. Fierce night howls paved the way And the way it was deleterious The love of my father, she snaked away. Children raced past our well-lit display An unintentional metamorphosis Watch me slave at words I could never say. A crow-haired woman asked, "was I okay?" Lips crimson and voluptuous The love of my father, she snaked away. A god of wind, a shark at play Your past is not mysterious Watch me slave at words I could never say The love of my father, she snaked away.

horus8 20-May-03/4:47 PM
Don't wow my fucking poetry man, go wow your own. Because I can't appreciate it since everything I've read of yours is obviously some sort of trendy inside joke that I have no respect for, since, you have no respect for poetry. If you did, you'd write poetry and not nonsense. Unless you are looking for help, then ask, if not, go fuck scoria and scorpion holes. Thanks! wow!




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