Bachus10 May 2003

"As the fiesta draws nearer, I sit in axious wait"
Anxious typo.

"rabbits" should be singular.

"promised land" should be present tense. 'promise'

End your stanzas with periods.
Who cares about the sentences.
Use more commas, just a few before 'ands'.
Remove your last stanza, it's ridiculous.
Other then that, nice poem.

I'd give it an eight now nine later.