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Sanctuary (Free verse) by Lolly

The world passes I watch from the peepholes neither friend nor foe is welcome here I am hunkered down waiting watching deep within the watchtower protected hidden well in the gray folding hills silent listening to the rush of rivers undetected safe sanctuary within walls of thick skin

Bachus 9-May-03/12:02 PM
I would change thin to thick, really. 9. (this was the best poem i've read in a bit, probably the last 30 congradulations)




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