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Say Hello (Haiku) by Sawa

The sun, she rises -- Pinholed in cellophane clouds, Counting down the days

Jeremi B. Handrinos 4-Apr-03/12:41 PM
The sun is a masculine entity. The moon feminine.
Ruby's masculine. Emeralds feminine. To call the sun a she is practically counter effective. Like calling your mother 'dad' after shaving off her pubic hair and gluing it to her face.




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