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Temptation In Genesis (Haiku) by scitz

Adam ate the apple, And Temptation consumed him, Lucifer preened God. =============== by caducus ===============

poetandknowit 1-Apr-03/10:06 AM
This seems more like some young attempt to desperately try to say something deep and profound to make the reader shutter in awe. But as a haiku it really says nothing much. Look to the origins; find the eastern spirit of the form. This just mocks it. But, hey, who needs Shakespeare, eh?




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