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Triptych: Rural (Haiku) by lastobelus

Fallowing --------- crow rises, still black boot into clod of turned earth recoil, break, reload. Racing the Train ---------------- gunned under the bitch hissing, face flat out ugly with a brand new fear. Family Reunion ------- squalling bee-stung child. Uncles lean on their cars, beer takes away the sting.

horus8 16-Mar-03/3:15 PM
Choice cuts.




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