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My pimp's ceiling fan (Limerick) by Shardik

An Angel with poor circulation. Ponders his wheel chair's dimensions. Please do not retire. Your chariot's fire. In front of my intersection. As his friend's in the 'art' crowd applaud. Since, gay man all want a hot rod. Did you think I was faking? With the threats I was making? You were never Goth, you were Mod.

horus8 9-Mar-03/8:38 PM
"You sound like a beaver being
gang raped."

Now that is a sound that i'm sure you hear often. Nice metaphor much more believable then say an "evil curved breast".

Could i sound like Sophia loren getting gangraped by the golden girls next time? God i sure hope so. THankyou! Yor constant flattery is making me blush kind sir. An iq of 54? I don't recall my website disclosing that most sought after of misconceptions(i actually have no iq, truly, just a void) I really had no idea i was setting out to try to impress you, by what? saying you suck? Yes, that must of gave you the idea. Must I shoo> Can't i just whisper once more real sweet..........furke you?




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