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As the Redwood Ages (Free verse) by DurtKL

I, the dead man sleepwalking, Grindin through mugs of Folger's, While Poppin No-Doz as my fingers tremble. Eyes pulse to the beat Of books, thicker than the Torah, Dancing the tango with the Hardy - Weinberg theorem. Watson and Crick, The ambiguously boring duo Fucking the Virgin and Cornholing God. And as redwood ages on, The condom lies drying In the wastebasket.

horus8 7-Mar-03/10:03 AM
Dry semen, i feel, works much better then name dropping, or cornholing deities that simply just do not play a role any longer in our well being. God does not talk. No-doz? don't punk out, just take the real thing.
your imagery here, though fastly sought out i'm sure through hours of sleepless research. was like eating a mouthful of jelly beans, with meatloaf, and champagne while listening to Gobi desert sound bites on lsd and then sand papering ones elbows. Great job. 7.




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