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Aries, the God of war (Haiku) by Shardik

Ram horns crash, hoving. Whet stones sharply grind, census. Mars in retrograde.

horus8 7-Mar-03/9:48 AM
it's a hoofed spin i invented off of heaving. a mixed word between hovering, hove, hoof, and heaved. past and past part of heave, but now in the present, to be heaving in an uncertain state, a hybrid word. one word out of twelve? i hardly call that masking now mr. foster. i believe it set's up the fear of war when going into it's cousin word upon the page, census.




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