poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Extended Stay (the motel) by THE GOD OF DEATH.

horus85 Mar 2003

"From above, the mechanic rhythm
Of another's ecstacy,
As empty as the one below.
The old man, to be young again,
Takes pleasure in the act,
While the woman
Underneath
Prays for its end.
Her prayer is answered
With a gasp and a shudder,
As the squeaks decrescendo
To a soft pianissimo" this forced a giggle though. through clenched perfect teeth of course, the squeek of the fecund.