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Whales (Haiku) by Jeremi B. Handrinos

A whale's suicide. Beaching herself with eyes wide. Cleaner than Ocean. Dry docked whale boat. Captain strikes match off his leg. Leaning on that bone. Boy visits sea world. Falls into Killer Whale tank. The whales save his life.

OneFingerAnswer 5-Mar-03/1:32 AM
I remember in third grade I wrote

Save the whales
Save them all
Save the whales
Big and small

I thought I was a genius. I later found out I was wrong.

"All(1)+ people(2)+ are(1)+ flawed(2)" = 6.
Maybe...
"All people are flaws"
It's a little harsher but it fits.




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