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REALITY (Free verse) by NewbieMe

If it were another time, I'd spend each moment with you If I were in another place, I'd be there beside you If it could work out, I'd be completely devoted to you If things were to be fair, I'd be unselfish to you If this was destined to be, then I'd never leave you If it was... but it was not

Bachus 22-Feb-03/12:37 PM
What makes this a superior poem is the fact that it burns with the anti poem identity of the new young poetically devoid movement out of a small sandusky ohio church's lawn mower shack. Now, as my friend james would say "out the window with it".




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