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vent tent (Free verse) by Crakyamuni

Shelter here now! embracing the displaced feelings you were dealing like rocks your whole life through- Fuck you! I never gave in to whatever was clever or benificial and entirely superficial It's official- you're regrets make you seem like the weakness of my knees in a dreams last disease With ease!- I can squeeze the juices out of this life never looking for soul or strife, only sacrifice in the wake of a path readily taken and forsaken {}"}{}{}{}{{"}{"}{} sanity-equivelant to vanity but there are times when it seems less than a shit riddled dream it's here that fear lingers and tears this place is all too familiar and yet never there but why even express it's insight for those who couldn't or shouldn't care.

horus8 20-Feb-03/11:57 AM
I have never heard a buddhist come out of left field like you just did to express his feelings in such a un-monkishishish way. You are my hero. you wouldn't know budha from Malthusian. maybe that's your gimmeck? give em hell kid! here i packed you a lunch and even wrote your name on it, so i wouldn't forget who you are and you would never remember and nobody brought a fgucking snack anyway, Chip.




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