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The darkest woods ever (Sonnet) by Shardik

They were the darkest woods ever At least that I had ever seen Trees with leaves almost of leather Animals, that struck me as too lean. So I quickened up my rigid stride While my eyes scanned for some light If I had a horse, full speed I'd ride If my lungs were not so tight. I never should have dared to trespass God damn shortcuts are always wrong Where is my boyscout with his compass? Why is this taking so awfully long!? Wait... Is that a light I see up ahead? No... Just the moon climbing higher instead.

horus8 15-Feb-03/10:46 AM
Once i went for a walk in the woods and learned how to make mail bombs, and anthrax. I ate dogshit while i was there. Raw. Naw, just kidding, but my mother once left me for a night alone at a camp site in Kauai. i was molested by a poltergeist. i liked it. it changed me though forever now i have the dark streal, and not in my pants.




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