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ReplyTo a comment on The shirt I wore to dinner. by Jeremi B. Handrinos.

==Doylum4 Feb 2003

stop it with the racyism, and the ruderies. No neeed. Perhaps you could have said

Utter suger. 1. You attempt to shock, but just leave me cold, safe in the knowledge I have discovered yet another dumb flunk.

or

Utter slop. 1. You attempt to shock, but just leave me cold, safe in the knowledge I have discovered yet another dumb twot.

or

Utter tripe. 1. You attempt to shock, but just leave me cold, safe in the knowledge I have discovered yet another dumb waiter.