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Mom And Dad (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom

My mother is a hippocrite My father is full of shit My life is so fucked up Who cares its fucked up? Well everything that i've ever done was never good enough for any one Well now i'm having my revenge I'm going to burn you and your shit town Its all coming down The flames are shooting up and burning down Everything that you once tried to build Your world is falling apart And now you know how it feels My parents are killing me For the way that i am My world is falling apart And there is is nothing that i can do Well i'm gonna rip out your guts and throw'em against the wall Now you'll know my pain And i won't have to explain The hurt inside of my head Cause you'll all be dead And i'll be left all alone My mom and dad are destroying me And there is nothing that i can do Well i'm gonna fight back I'm gonna be heard You'll all know my name I'm gonna murder and massacure and burn your ass Teach you the meaning of pain You'll all know my name And my suffering

Jeremi B. Handrinos 28-Jan-03/12:26 AM
yikes. yeah..that about says it all. you know i was going to come over here with a squad of superfiscialy intelligent fish heads and minions, and give you a pleasant berating, but then i read your poem,. and openly wept for abused 'childes' everywhere, and forget why i came...oh yeah to say well. NO-BRAINER.enjoy your time here. here's some dry turkey sole. 0. nah fuckit you apparently gave it all. granted a brick, an air ball, but what the hell. right? 2?




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