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Unmasking Wyverns (Villanelle) by horus8

Watch me slave at words I could never say Monsoon shark god furious The love of my father, she snaked away. Wind swept waves bled 'til Sunday It's a shame I am that curious Watch me slave at words I could never say. Fierce night howls paved the way And the way it was deleterious The love of my father, she snaked away. Children raced past our well-lit display An unintentional metamorphosis Watch me slave at words I could never say. A crow-haired woman asked, "was I okay?" Lips crimson and voluptuous The love of my father, she snaked away. A god of wind, a shark at play Your past is not mysterious Watch me slave at words I could never say The love of my father, she snaked away.

horus8 24-Jan-03/10:51 PM
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Masking Wyverns

Watch me slave at words I could never say
Monsoon shark god furious
The love of my father, she snaked away

Wind swept waves bled 'til Sunday
It?s a shame I am that curious
Watch me slave at words I could never say

Fierce night howls paved the way
And the way it was deleterious
The love of my father, she snaked away

Children raced past our well-lit display
An unintentional metamorphosis
Watch me slave at words I could never say

A raven-haired woman asked, "was I okay?"
Lips crimson and voluptuous
The love of my father, she snaked away

A god of wind, a shark at play
Your past is not mysterious
Watch me slave at words I could never say
The love of my father, she snaked away.




because i know how you are about spelling





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