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Bottom (Free verse) by ThoughtfulSoul

Being at the bottom is a lonely place Even when there is people around me I feel as though not a soul is close When I'm touched lonliness still reminds me that its not real and that I'm truly in a dark room by myself I hear voices that echo across the dark gloomy walls but the sound is just coming from the only person that I truly know is there myself

horus8 22-Jan-03/7:47 PM
Have no fear..it's only a black out while eating at mcdonalds, feel that...there there...hold my mcnuggets.




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