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Minoan lover (Lyric) by Jeremi B. Handrinos

Crete is where I left you On the first day of Spring Crete is where I left you With kiss and golden ring Crete is where I left you To go fight a King's war Crete is where I left you On a boat from the shore Crete is where I left you Though it tore out my heart Crete is where I left you In a house with no start Crete is where I left you While I die on this field Crete is where I left you With my son and my shield.

<~> 21-Jan-03/6:44 PM
this would make a fuck of a villanelle, h




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