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'Fucky Fucky 5 Dollar' (Free verse) by scitz

On Surangwose Road I heard them shout, 'Fucky Fucky 10 dollar, me love you long time', I tucked my cock between my legs, Apeing Buffalo Bill from Silence Of the Lambs, Then pulled down my pants shouting 'OK GIRLS LETS GET IT ON' Then they removed their wigs, And beat me unconscious. They beat me long time, The Lady Boys of the Ramada Hotel, Now I eat with a straw, Use Bob Martins talc borrowed from a guy at the marine corr, Hail, Bangkok sniff the dragons nose at the Bangkok Hilton, Drop the soap in a full shower of lady boys, Die in a horribly camp manner. You make me horny, Me Love you a long time. (Written on a beer mat waiting to be served)

Ornella Muti 19-Jan-03/4:15 PM
Another masterpiece! The Ramada Hotel, an Indian owned establishment, full of bugs hard to identify....the one in downtown LA is out of this world....I've never seen so many baby roaches. Did you know that a roach can survive without its head for nine days? You would've had you read "Things that make you go hmmm" There's this sheme (transvestite) that I see all the time strutting her/his stuff on Santa Monica Blvd...she looks like she might be from Hong Kong...ahhhhh...I'm getting a mental picture of her saying fucky, fucky 10 dollar me love you long time.......sorry, I tend to go on tangents at times.




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