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Breathless. (Free verse) by Service

I slide between white folds I see myself through moist reflection. I feel hot breath I hear my heart, my ears ringing. Her face is restfull. Her eyes close, reflection lost. A smile starts. My hand is held, sleep comes swiftly. Not how i thought life would be, But now it starts with my wife to be.

horus8 16-Jan-03/9:53 PM
wasn't that special. you're classic seven..why ? because you're luckier than us you bastard. a fine balanced poem.




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