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Old Man (Free verse) by keatsImnot

Old Man Today I met an old man in a worn out dirty raincoat. Who said he'd been a soldier, and had fought four years in France. He didn't look a soldier, he looked so frail and feeble. So far away from fighting, in the fields where poppies dance.

horus8 16-Jan-03/2:41 PM
I'm partial to poppies and soldiers, and revolution. Not just because i have the band morphine blaring 11 currently either. nice quick verse here. cut and dry. have a 9.




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