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The dance (Free verse) by purplestain

Did you have any idea, How happy I was when you asked for a dance? My spirits were soaring, And it only took your two strong arms to bring me back, Your warm embrace melted my cold icy guard, The world just passed me by, As I look into your eyes, And you drew me closer, The moment was just like a dream, A dance I will never forget.

horus8 3-Jan-03/1:42 AM
sorry, i thought you were a girl i new from butterfield, minn. if you can believe that....strong poem, simple, and see how well it worked! a universal theme and feel to it, i wouldn't be suprised if more people responded to this the way i did. have an eight.




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