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Comfort Food (Free verse) by jessicazee

A being can crawl into a kreplach Or expand within a stuffed shell Fists clenched, rageless. Blintz bliss in a girdle of papery crepe - A snug lumpia in hand Softens a beast in the body. A vessel, full filled, becomes Pillows for smallest children, Vital hugs, dumplings. A breast, a pierogi Embraced by slender Rinds of vellum and pulp. To be or to ravioli, The pot stickers Have answers, have nature.

Bachus 20-Dec-02/7:14 PM
"snug lumpia" are better than pierogis any day. this was a great poem and still will be later, after 'was'.




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