poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on (Rough Draft) The Adventures of Zoot and Corky by Owner of the Sky.

Bachus16 Dec 2002

people are strange, submissive dominant sex is the rave of the future, because it was the rave of the past. tension builds and creates. where's the backstory here? gone. leaving the reader with an empty space to fill using their own imaginations. that can be good and bad que no. a good spanking and dinner on the floor does loads for a struggling relationship..well, much more than an overpaid JEW shrink none the less. nice poem.