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Girlz (Free verse) by liljsmith87

There are these 2 girls and I love them more then anything They have everything I want And nothing but them is anymore important to me But there of coarse are some problems Ones that arent easy to fix I try my best to solve em But of coarse I cant get rid of the pricks let alone this one bitch Who, used to be my friend Until she got pissed Made one mistake And she put me on "THE LIST" So now Angie isnt my friend All because I went wrong Terryn made my life miserable Wished at first I didnt belong But then I look at the good side Happy the other girl I love is still my friend And try to make sure This friendship wont end.

horus8 4-Dec-02/4:30 PM
can i ask you a sincere question? WHAT IN THE FUCK ARE YOU BABBLING ABOUT, AND WHAT EXACTLY CONVINCED YOU SPECIFICALLY speaking, THAT ANYONE SERIOUS ABOUT WRITING WOULD GIVE A FUCK?!




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