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An Exercise in Futility (Free verse) by loneshadow29

seeds of darkness planted deep within where happiness blooms but darkness comes consuming all things he fought so very hard to keep the darkness at bay to keep his precious sanity but in the end it all proved futile for now there is nothing left no joy, no life at all only an endless void a hollow shell where a proud man once stood

horus8 14-Nov-02/12:23 PM
what the fuck ever. seriously in all actuality you are a total fucking tarpuffer lonedisco29and ahalf..obviously the loose bowels of an over weight turnip..even dark angel has more trajectory..well.. even anthony robbins has more class than this and that shite head is classless...sorry for fogging up your glasses, but come on... you are grasping at gophers on a dark highway in minnesota..let go man...just let go. here..a hug. 0. this isn't even a real poem it's a fucking advertisement aimed at something called jealousy...drink a diet shasta..i recommend...boysenberry.




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