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Ode to a Depleted Uranium Shell (Ode) by Yardbird

Small, curved, Beautifully sculpted, A masterpiece of the modern age! Admire it's grace, It's poise and charm, A it sings through the ethers! Marvel at the artistry As it tears through flesh, Cavorting through bone and sinew! See it simmer with mirth, As its hidden 'delights' finally claim The one that 'got away'.

god'swife 13-Nov-02/9:24 AM
Thank you! It is very sweet of you to answer my request. I don' get the visual of 'simmer with mirth' but that is my only criticism. If you did a bit of research a bet you could come up with a real killer, ha ha. Now when I look up DU on the web your poem will come up along with 100,000 other sites. You should be proud.




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