Poemranker [Replying] Thu Nov 21 09:42:29 PST 2024

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My cousin's baby sitter. (Haiku) by Bachus

Sunshine was fifteen when i popped her ripe cherry. The sunset bled well. Rollicking i sang as i came, and came, and came. Filled her up just right! She broke two nails in my back before i flipped her over. Here cums the encore. I finished her quick. But i got dressed quicker. Cigarette anyone?

Bachus

10-Nov-02/3:37 PM

hey baby! how are you? i don't know why i miss you? we've never met, nor has anyone left? anyway congradulations on the base ment full of merlot...did you see frida yet or punchdrunk love? something tells me that we have a terribly large amount of unusual things in common..important things.. like boobs and merlot..just kidding.anyhow some lame poet is putting the moves on my son's mother currently(one of these self published types that goes around autographing his own book and handing them out to thee overimpressionable)..so i have to go rescue her...my superman haircut justs never lets me rest. this by no means has anything to do with my persistent fascination with you. i was just thinking out loud...talk to you later. luv h.

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