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My cousin's baby sitter. (Haiku) by Bachus

Sunshine was fifteen when i popped her ripe cherry. The sunset bled well. Rollicking i sang as i came, and came, and came. Filled her up just right! She broke two nails in my back before i flipped her over. Here cums the encore. I finished her quick. But i got dressed quicker. Cigarette anyone?

Bachus 9-Nov-02/3:02 PM
really? i'm glad you got a laugh. you deserve many more, and i'll be the first to admit that you are the keeper of the last tid bits of what remains of my ego? could you give me little more back today i'm feeling talentless and a little down right now. to begin with i have no clue as to why you give a shit, nor why i'm even responding, eviltwin, and on top of that sir evil you're about as dark and intimidatingly accurate as a lame dwarf with a dead eye...you should perhaps..get a pen pal, and open up a line of communication with someone who actually gives a fuck.dickhead.




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