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Wise Clogg! (Limerick) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.

A bebop singer's shoe Was, then did, times two. For the Clogg had heard his Master's words: "Shoe-be-do-be-do."

Yardbird 6-Nov-02/7:07 AM
Poor and inane - 3 points, and only because you did at least include some kind of structure. Oh, and as a professional bebop saxophonist, I implore you to stop embarrasing yourself by displaying the vast gaps in your knowledge - "shoe-be-do-be-do" is utter bollocks. Proper bop scat singing goes something like this:
"Oo-bop-eel-ya-da, bop-sh'bam, a-klook-a-mop". Show some respect, you cock-knocker.




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