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Youth Fair (Free verse) by daniella

..................................................... Beautiful view of laundered yards, A church, a schoolyard, shooting gallery. Buy your token at the far-right stand. Take your turn. You Lost? Do come again. When the sticky pink cotton dress Gets stuck between your thighs, You'll remember all those days, all those ways of making it up.

horus8 5-Nov-02/12:11 PM
i will keep this in mind when i go to my ten year reunion in a few months. lovely.




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