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Beer (Haiku) by Yardbird

Liquid bread, on tap, A poor man's Ambrosia, Piss in pint glasses.

Tintagiles 29-Oct-02/9:13 AM
Though I agree with your verdict on beer (though may I add it should be 'horse piss'), as a poem this is almost as detestable as the subject. Or was that the point?




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