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Second Attempt at Haiku (Free verse) by loneshadow29

thanks for the water life's flame will meet its end what? a trick candle?

horus8 28-Oct-02/10:15 AM
what do you think should happen to the bad guys, lone blee blah? i'm really that interested. fucking cads. trick candles? wow. that's genu-wine and prophetic. blee blee blah blah. congrats lonedisco29.5! you win the blee blah award for eternal bliss in blissania. enjoy your trip. and you frass, should be put down also with mohammed and the carribean pool boy..you just know deep down he was blowing the older one as the trigger got pulled...you just gotta know huh..yes. i know. they'll burn like 4th of july red devil stand fountains..there afros will compress and implode as their eyes deflate and their long thick black uncut penises do the zipper shine into forever...yes into forever.....yes..into foreverm as a a a trend.3.




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