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Living Conditions (Free verse) by Christof

Dark October days, When it seems the clouds Have sucked the light into their cheeks, Always feel like this: The year's blind slope Towards winter, The burrowing mole In its grope Towards the warm womb Of the earth, The improbability of the sun And our place in it.

horus8 26-Oct-02/8:52 AM
i would of liked more, but i guess autumn is about waning. huh? 6. liked the cheeky clouds by the way. carry on. tonights my last night as captain von trapp. i think that calls for some filipino hookers and some speedballs in the back of an rv moving at a good fourty-five mph. heading east with a well paid driver (a sober black madagascrian of course) how long would it take me to get to sioux city, south dakota? stopping to pee every hour on the hour, (from hollywood) and to buy some teriyaki beef jerky...that's a nasty riddle..the winner gets a lifetime supply of salt and vinegar lays potato chips. good day




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