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Coloured waifs home (Haiku) by horus8

Louis Armstrong blows out a song for the orphans They will sleep tonight

UnityMitford 24-Oct-02/9:46 AM
nice and short. also surprising from you. a little sentimental. not sure you can have orphans in a poem unless they are being thrown from a bridge.




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