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Parallel (Lyric) by aperfecttool77

I???d give my every last breath to her Just so she could spread her beauty to the world I???d take all her pain from her Just so she would never be sad I???d take away all her fears Just so she would never have to cry I???d hold her in my arms forever Just so she would never have to be alone I???d breathe her in Just to keep her forever close I???d give it all just to I???d end it all just to I???d do anything at all just to Hear her say the same.

horus8 22-Oct-02/10:43 PM
you have no grasp of the haiku. it can be out of the 575 and less than and rearranged. and as for your lyric well...it's not..you fail. purposely, i would hope. and quite poorly. congratulations!




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