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Die (Free verse) by little_angel_maria

You just left me now, oh why? The room oh so cold, oh why? I feel so scared without you, can't you see in need you, Oh why did you have to die? Oh you just left me here, here i am lying lonely on the bed, where we played games, where you kissed me and made love to me. Oh here I am not knowing what to do, staring at our picture up there on the wall, it seems like it was just yesterday when you came home and asked me to marry you. Oh here I am missing you, please come back home, I love you, I swear to god I love you, Oh why did you have to die.

horus8 21-Oct-02/5:44 PM
have you been sleeping with the red power ranger again? hogging the kix? perhaps..the daughter of an admiral? you smell like poisoned carrion, even the vultures won't touch you...i fear your meat...has turned sweet. it's not so much the maggots spilling from your plastic surgery wounds, or the reek of north african garlic from your rectum, but more or less an down and dirty aura thing. sorry. dr. pepperstein says your bad for my chi...he also said you watch that tv show birds of prey, and that makes you very uninteresting...in very young latin pass me the rum and the vaccuum sort of way.




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