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A Well Worth Wait (Free verse) by savannah

It took so long, But now we are together and, I know it will last forever, Not just a relationship but also a friendship that will grow on forever. We had such a good friendship, That I thought it would never become more. But later on I started to think about you all the time, And wish that we were more than just friends. I would imagine you holding me tight, I could just see you as being Mr. Right, Telling me everything would be o.k. And knowing you truly cared. I told you everything before, Except that I loved you. So now that we are finally together, I???ll start by telling you that??? I love you!!

Bachus 20-Oct-02/12:36 PM
the questoion marks have to go, followed by tghe poem. out the window with the lot of it. too goody goody, and mushy without any balance. try tiger milk and some poe.




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