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d e e p e r (Free verse) by daniella

t h a t i c o u l d i w o u l d s w i m d o w n d e e p e r t o t o u c h w h a t m a y h a v e b e e n i n a s e a o f t i m e l e s s n e s s. t o f i n d y o u t h e r e s t a n d i n g f i r m l y o n t h e s a n d s o f y e a r s b e t w e e n u s. t o b r i n g m e c l o s e r s h i f t i n g t h e s e d i m e n t b e n e a t h s t i r r i n g t h e w a t e r t o e m b r a c e u s i n a c l o u d w h e r e n o t h i n g i s a s is a n d c o u l d t h a t w e w o u l d a l w a y s b e.

horus8 15-Oct-02/1:29 PM
this is concrete and WINS THE HORUS 8 GOLDEN Q-TIP AWARD ON THIS FINE DAY. loved it! have a fine navy day.9.




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