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My cousin's baby sitter. (Haiku) by Bachus

Sunshine was fifteen when i popped her ripe cherry. The sunset bled well. Rollicking i sang as i came, and came, and came. Filled her up just right! She broke two nails in my back before i flipped her over. Here cums the encore. I finished her quick. But i got dressed quicker. Cigarette anyone?

balthazar 26-Sep-02/8:06 AM
this veers between strangely poetic and idiotically juvenile. i, personally, would like it if it went even further into juvenalia (sp), but that's me. oh, and could you make her younger in a rewrite? 15 is kind of old, don't you think?




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