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courtyard (Free verse) by lmp

i often hear: rain splashing upon the rock, the melody echoing off the walls. today: only silence, an eddied dance of white on wind.

amanda_dcosta 26-Nov-10/11:10 AM
Very nice feel to this short verse. Picturesque.

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